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Sunday 12 November 2017

Piggy The Little Princess

W.A.L.T:Use a variety of punctuation.
This week in writing we have been learning how to add ellipsis, exclamation marks and speech marks in our stories and this is my story. Something I enjoyed was making the presentation, what I did well was making the pictures and something I could do better next time would be to add more ellipsis, exclamation marks and speech marks in my story. 

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  1. Anonymous13 November 2017 at 12:38

    Hi Siobhan, it's Lauren from Room 8
    I really liked the concept of a Pig being a "Princess" or so being called/named princess. Maybe next time you could do more slides for a... "What happened next"? or just make another slide continuing the story. Over all I really liked it and I thought it was really cute, I look forward to seeing more work from you.

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    1. Anonymous11 December 2017 at 14:37

      Hi Lauren,
      Thank you for going through my blog and commenting on this post. I'm glad that you like the idea of how there is a pig called princess. If I had some more time I would add more slides and continue the story.

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