This week in writing our class read a book about a unicorn and we thought about the theme and this week out task in writing was to write a story and it had to include ellipsis and rhymes and this is mine. Something I enjoyed was making up the story, something I did well was using my imagination and something I could do better next time would be to include more ellipsis and even more rhymes to make it more interesting.
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Mary The Very Scary Fairy
There once was a fairy called Mary. She was a very delightful berry. Mary spent all of her life so far in the deep dark forest. Where there was no peep and she was asleep. As days flew by, she got bored and bored and bored, as she snored and snored and snored. That very delightful berry was now a very sour cherry.
She had nobody to comfort her, it was all a blur. So she decided to keep herself busy. Instead of getting dizzy. So Mary flew from one house to another, and this time it was Joe’s house. The one with the pet mouse. Mary tried to creep but instead she leaped and shouted… ”BOO!”. But it sounded like a moo. After she scared Joe the one with the bow, she saw a wintery rose but chose to make Joe even more scared and unprepared... She hid under Joe’s bed where there was a sled. Mary started to push Joe’s bed up. The then there was a pup.“That will be sure to leave Joe with chills up his spine, not like mine” Mary said sounding amused and not confused. Joe woke up in tears and he was downstairs. He didn't like what Mary did to him So he decided to take a swim.
Joe went back to sleep and when he woke up he was in a jeep.In the morning when it seemed boring. He started to hatch a plan, But first he wanted to go to the capital of japan. His plan was to get revenge and scare her back something like a wolf pack. Joe wanted to make Mary scared and not prepared, so that she'll know what it was like for Joe with the bow. So there was a lot of researching on the internet and there was infinite paths for Joe. to find out where mary shined. Finally Joe comes across a kindly little village and he spots lots of little dots with some bots but he knew they were fairies that had some berries. A few days later the skater decided to skate to his destination and he listened to the radio station. Soon after Joe saw a bus station. Joe kept driving and striving. “Finally we're here” Joe spoke with a tear.
Later in the day Joe came across some hay and a village that has fairies with some berries. Joe boomed“they don’t look like fairies” as he looked confused. Joe ambled through this place as it looked like a disgrace he had never been before. Joe came across a little hut that the boss it had a sign by the bus line, with Mary’s name on it. He crept steadily and readily and ROAR! But it sounded like a bore, It was Joe scaring Mary this time it was like a crime. Again like mary he crawled under her bed but you could see Joe’s head. and instead of shaking and making her bed go up and down like a clown. Joe felt a breeze come through so he got her shoe and banged it on the ground and all he heard was… AHHHHHHHHHH! But it was like a BAAAAAAAAA. It was the sound of some sheep screaming in fright like they had a flea bite on a international night flight.
A few hours later when Joe was a skater. He left all the fairies with the berries and cherries. Mary the scary fairy, had a think about how Joe the one with the beard must of been scared. She thought about how she felt when Joe the one that has one million bows scared her.
Later on, at about eight at pine tree state. There was a little tap at the window like there was a bat at the window beside Joe. It was Mary the very scary fairy. So Joe opened the window and Mary said “I'm sorry for scaring you Joe with all the bows I only did it because I was bored and didn’t have a sword to play with. “I know how you feel because you scared me and I didn’t like it so I am very very very sorry!” Joe excepted Mary’s apology and he announced as he bounced up and down in joy“I am so sorry too for scaring you!”So Mary excepted Joe’s apology.
Suddenly out of the blue like he was at the zoo Joe exclaimed “Mary the very scary fairy now is Mary the Very sweet fairy”, and ever since then the weather has been better and they have been the friends that are now blessed.
