The Importance Of Animals Used In War

W.A.L.T.. To create a newspaper article about the importance of animals used in war. I enjoyed finding out information to write down. Something I could do better next time is to keep adding  more information to this so it is more interesting.

Life In The Trenches

W.A.L.T.. To read" life in the trenches" and describe how people risk their lives for others. I enjoyed  reading the text and putting it into my own words. Something I could do better next time is to put more points down.

Sams Flashback

W.A.L.T Write a flashback from a different perspective and use show not tell.

The book is called "The Anzac Puppy" by Peter Millett and Trish Bowles. I enjoyed doing this because you got to be that person and you used your imagination during this, Next time I will make sure I use punctuation and make the sentences more shorter.

As I come outside I am sweating like mad, it was as if  I was in a oven. All that I heard were some annoying noises boom, crash and bang coming from the explosions.

Running, hiding and shaking came the soldiers. When I saw them I felt some tears dropping from my cheek but then I feel some saliva on my face I realise it’s Freda trying to cheer me up. Freda is a good dog. She makes all the rats scuttle away. I am so lucky to have Freda. I feel so comforted now.

Strategies

We have been learning about Highest common factors. I enjoyed linking the numbers to what makes 24. Next time I could add more pictures and explain more.

Leader Creature

In class we have made our own leader Creature and we had to do a prezi about it. I enjoyed zooming in on parts and talking abut what the leader creature does. Something I could do better next time could be to add more slides and make it more intresting.

strategies

In class we have been learning about writing long numbers. I enjoyed making this and learning about this. Next time I could space things out a bit more.

Goldilocks

Last week on Friday our class had to write a story about Goldilocks but we had to put it in our own way, I really enjoyed making up part of this story, something I could do better is put more descriptive words in this piece of writing. 

Goldilocks

Once upon a time there was a young girl named Goldilocks, she was the only girl on this planet who was stinky she was so stinky she had dirty flies around her.

About one year ago her parents kicked Goldilocks out of the house because she couldn't control her stinky smell. One day Goldilocks was wondering about in the forest, she was as tired as a sloth and she was going to give up walking because she had lost so much of her energy, bot then suddenly out of nowhere a whole family of bears came walking towards Goldilocks. So she quickly shot behind a large tree, then finally she got out of her hiding spot and kept walking until she came across a cottage, Goldilocks was so impolite some she just walked in.

Goldilocks found some porridge lying on the table and straight away took notice of baby bear’s  one and scoffed it right up. In the sunlight that was shining through the window, you saw her eyes glimmering as she spotted a chair that looked very comfortable and just right, the next thing you knew Goldilocks was lying on the ground with broken pieces of baby bear’s chair scattered around her. ( Everyone knew what that meant that she was not right for baby bears chair even though it looked just right in Goldilocks eyes )

Once Goldilocks had finished eating and breaking a chair she decided to go up stairs and have a nap in one of the beds, as she was going up the stairs she heard footsteps coming from down stairs, she froze for a minute it was the bears so Goldilocks ran back downstairs, past the bears and out the door and into a pond to wash of her dirtiness. The bears looked with rage in their eyes while tried to put baby bear's chair back to normal. Goldilocks came home and gave her parents a big hug because she is now all clean. Goldilocks is happy but the bears decided not to leave their house again.