This week we have been learning about legends and we had to come up with our own legends and use show not tell and this is mine. Something I enjoyed was drawing the pictures, something I did well was using show not tell, something I could do better next time would be to add more detail to the pictures.
Saturday, 8 July 2017
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You have created a wonderful legend Siobhan. You have used great adjectives in your writing to really build that picture in my head. I like the pictures you have created to go with your story. Well done finishing this during your holidays! You should be proud as an author.
ReplyDeleteHi Claire Wilton,
ReplyDeleteThank you for the amazing comment. I'm happy that I have built a picture in your head, I'm glad you like my pictures that goes with the story because I had worked really hard on them.
This comment has really boosted my confidence.
Thank you for taking some time to read my legend.
Siobhan.